Dedication to the Hurricane Katrina Victims..

[litoshawn4o9]

yo check it

they say hurricane katrina was a catagory 5
i never knew so many people could've live or died//
lost everything in a blink of an eye
while i just sit here watchin families bout to cry//
flooded homes, businessess lost to the water
how can i just sit here while children lose their fathers//
i feel so helpless to the poor in need
i wish i could be one of the people to plant a new seed//
bring a good deed, katrina was expected yet came unprepared
now im seeing people with the look of life aint being fair//
we now give goods for the care, families relocated
i guess this how life is, katrina now being hated//
hurricane gon be dated, as the worse event ever
they say its worse than the tsunami but i say never//
this flow may be clever, as its my dedication to the loss
who lost their homes and families frm katrina's cause//
hopin tomorrow will shine a new day
where everybody can start a new life
as the first word they say//
now we gotta look at the bigger situation
on how everbody gotta start life as a new continuation//
so i give my respects to the people who lost
i leave this in writing in ice of the up coming frost//

[XceKutN Ph0-sHo]

MAD PROPS SHAWN!!! thats good stuff keep up yo good flows

[dragon1290]

i hear ya man...

[babydorkee]

yupzzz...i agreee...great flow!

[froggyboy604]

great poem.

[Hikari]

Nice! Ever considered makin' an account here? That way you could post even more of your great poems!

[Nemo]

Beautiful, but sad.