No More Sun

StevenF50 · Post by **StevenF50** » Sat Dec 11, 2010 10:25 pm

Hello,

This is my 4th Autumn poem but the only one on the internet.

It’s an autumn day,
And you pray for the sun to stay,
But inside you know,
That the suns glow,
Is gone.

No sunny dawns,
Nor plants in the lawns,
Colour has been drained,
Plant life can’t be maintaned,
It’s Autumn

Thanks.

Post by **froggyboy604** » Sun Dec 12, 2010 1:43 am

great ryhmes

mftx5kt3 · Post by **mftx5kt3** » Sun Dec 19, 2010 11:02 pm

StevenF50 · Post by **StevenF50** » Thu May 05, 2011 7:32 pm

Thanks for your replies.

babydorkee · Post by **babydorkee** » Wed May 11, 2011 8:49 am

nice poem! its probably a typo here, but you spelled maintained wrong